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Blue Bell Flower

as the snow slowly leaves us in springs longer day, you brighten the land scape with your cheery blue way, so soft and so tender as the season sways your colour brings magic of natures sweet way, through the soft night you blossom with might with your blue little flower what a lovely sight, waving and greeting as the sun shows face nature has giving us the smile of your grace, you spring up so sudden when the morning starts so welcome so bright such a joy to our hearts, coloured by nature you smile in the sun glowing and showing your nature fun, keep glowing you beauty make our hearts swell sparkling and twinkle you little blue bell,,,,,,

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Date: 5/19/2011 7:02:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Davy. Love, Carol
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Davy Young
Date: 5/21/2011 6:11:00 PM
thank you angel xx
Date: 5/18/2011 9:54:00 PM
Davy this is lovely but it does not qualify for the contest you have entered it in. Perhaps you could remove it and enter one that is a dodoitsu , there is a description on the contest itself and in the forms of poetry section of this site, I would love to see you attempt the correct form for the contest
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Davy Young
Date: 5/21/2011 6:12:00 PM
sorry i do not know how to remove it from contest, when i find out will re do another one

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