Blue and Red

The city sizzles 
Five die of heat stroke, the tree
Bursting in red joy
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April 29// 2017
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Rodrigues Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 8:48 PM
Always colorful!
Gupta Avatar
April 30, 2017 at 10:53 PM
Discoloured eyes are ... Always after some colour ... Red blossoms oblige ...
Behm Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 9:05 AM
I love "the tree bursting in red joy" Very powerful! Kurt
Gupta Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 11:18 AM
Thank you ... You are perfectly right in your liking for the red joy ... it is here that the haiku dwells ...
Daniel Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 8:58 AM
Sad haiku, Probir, this year is really very hot all over India:(
Gupta Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 11:19 AM
Indeed so ... we are passing through very hard days ...
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