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The city sizzles Five die of heat stroke, the tree Bursting in red joy _____________________________________ April 29// 2017

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Date: 4/29/2017 8:48:00 PM
Always colorful!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/30/2017 10:53:00 PM
Discoloured eyes are ... Always after some colour ... Red blossoms oblige ...
Date: 4/29/2017 9:05:00 AM
I love "the tree bursting in red joy" Very powerful! Kurt
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/29/2017 11:18:00 AM
Thank you ... You are perfectly right in your liking for the red joy ... it is here that the haiku dwells ...
Date: 4/29/2017 8:58:00 AM
Sad haiku, Probir, this year is really very hot all over India:(
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/29/2017 11:19:00 AM
Indeed so ... we are passing through very hard days ...