Tim B Poet Rhyme

Blue and Red

Such a lovely color this deep blue hue
Otherworldy lies too dark to be true
She counts sapphire stars under the moon
Disorderly dreams fallen down too soon

Moods shifting, red hot heat burning embers
Eyelashes lifted in cold glances still simmers
She bleeds an ice frosted shade that haunts
Nightmares that coil inward, sends red taunts

The fiery meteor has landed
Molten lava inside her has expanded
Consumed in fire she explodes in scorched rage
Aged, drained, turning back to the blue page

It starts to frost over again this time
Azure lake of emotion hides this her crime
Pray the red does not awake, this is true
Such a lovely color this deep blue hue

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Chuck Melugin February 23, 2014 at 7:56 PM Tim I loved the color changes with the mood swings! great write 7, my best chuck

Cherl Dunn February 17, 2014 at 6:52 PM Wow I truly enjoyed your imagery, beautifully done, love the blue hue part the best also the red lava really i enjoyed all of it. I'm glad you enjoyed my gentleman poem the inspirational man was a real gentle in real life. cheri Tim B February 18, 2014 at 10:07 AM Cherl, No problem, thank you for stopping by and commenting on my poetry. I really enjoyed your poem about the gladiators and the Coloseum.

Russell Sivey February 17, 2014 at 3:27 PM I'm partial to green myself, a deep soothing green is my pleasure, but blue and red are beautiful too, and blue can be very soothing as well! Red has an energy that blue seems to lack, but blue can be just as damaging truth be known! That's why I choose a lovely green, full of life within its own soul! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem here this afternoon! What a dynamic piece, Great Work!! Tim B February 18, 2014 at 10:09 AM Russell, Ahhh, it is all symbolic my friend. Green is very peaceful indeed. They say genius' choose green :).

Sara Kendrick February 17, 2014 at 3:09 PM Enjoyed reading this one today..Very expressive and descriptive work..Thanks for the visi to my page..Sara Tim B February 18, 2014 at 10:09 AM Hi Sara, Thanks for stopping by, i'm glad you enjoyed this one.