Blue Again

So in love, like a fool I fell. I thought you were sent from above, not from hell. Your shy smile turned into a sly grin. Yeah, I felt joy for a while. Now I’m just blue again. I wanted to believe in you, felt something I’d never known. Now I wonder why you left, left me all alone. Yeah, the joy I felt put me in a spin. But now I’m just blue again, Blue again, Blue again. By: Carole O’Terry Duet Copyright: Jan 31, 2018 “All Rights Reserved”

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/7/2018 6:22:00 PM

a real gem I found down here. Was hoping to find a new one because I've seen all your latest. Your lyrics could be a song!

Carole Duet
Date: 9/9/2018 8:53:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. I would love for someone to create a song with this poem. Carole

Caycay Jennings

Date: 2/2/2018 9:47:00 PM

The song that launched Leanne's career - I enjoyed the listen and found myself wondering where she faded off, and why. I love your simplicity / brevity style of writing that conveys complicated and universally felt human emotions so well. You excel at such, Carole, and that is a blessing to us all. All the best ... CayCay

Carole Duet
Date: 2/3/2018 9:40:00 PM

Thank you so much, Cay Cay. Your comment was a "blessing" to me. :D Carole

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/2/2018 2:18:00 AM

- A sensitive song, Carole - Music and words are perfect ... excellent :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carole Duet
Date: 2/3/2018 9:31:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. So glad you liked it. Carole :D

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/31/2018 10:16:00 PM

o Carole, the line "your shy smile turned into a sly grin" came me the shivers... Most women have been sucked in at one time or another. Easy to relate to your poem. Well done.

Carole Duet
Date: 2/2/2018 2:16:00 AM

Hi Line! Yep, "sucked in" like a sucker and it really sucks!! lol Glad you liked the poem. :D Carole

Silent One

Date: 1/31/2018 12:58:00 PM

I know you love that song, a great poem dedicated to it..

Carole Duet
Date: 2/2/2018 2:09:00 AM

Hey ZZ. Yes, I do love that song but I actually wrote the poem before listening to the song again and it had a different title. Then I listened to the song and decided to rename the poem and add the song. lol Crazy huh?

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/31/2018 8:37:00 AM

Smoothly written Carole. ! :)

Carole Duet
Date: 2/2/2018 2:06:00 AM

Thanks, Heidi. Carole Duet

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/31/2018 5:54:00 AM

A wonderful melancholy song you wrote Carole..would love to hear someone sing..well done, Carole.

Carole Duet
Date: 2/2/2018 2:05:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay. I am thinking about turning this poem into a song and I do have someone in mind to sing it. Carole

Maria Williams

Date: 1/31/2018 4:43:00 AM

This I can see would sound excellent put to music Carole. I really love it. You do have a way with words....Maria

Carole Duet
Date: 2/2/2018 2:02:00 AM

Thank you, Maria. I'm so glad you like it and I really would love to turn this poem into a song. Carole