Blue

i was blue, until I fell into the blue of your eyes.
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Smith Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 2:07 PM
I like this very much. Glad to see you posting in 2018 Jean. Hope 2018 is a good year for you. Best regards David in NZ
Murray Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 3:00 PM
Hi David. I miss NZ and the folks I met in Hawera. Every Xmas since 1984 a midwife turned artist, Jenny Bielawski and I exchange greetings. I have renewed my membership here for another two years, so hopefully my pen will not let me down too much. Thank you for stopping by to say Hello.
Ashley Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 8:21 PM
Oh Jean, this is so beautifully romantic and heartfelt. Just lovely.. Congratulations for your wonderful win! Warmest wishes ~Susan
Murray Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 2:27 PM
Fingers crossed. It's early days and my track record is not so hot Susan.
Ashley Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 8:42 AM
Ohh Jean, I'm so happy for your recent joy. May your romance bloom with blue amaranthine splendor :))
Murray Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 4:07 AM
Thank you Susan. After seven years of dating website hell, I have met a lovely local man. Brought up on an island off the coast, there is not a devious bone in his body. Romance is definitely in the air.
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January 5, 2018 at 8:54 PM
oh, this is really cool, Jean. Love how you think. Congrats on your win.
Murray Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 3:23 AM
Thank you Andrea. My subconscious wants to use poetry to articulate how I think......I think.
Scars Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 1:14 PM
awww how sweet, congrats sweet Jean : ) -luloo
Murray Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 2:37 PM
Thank you Laura.I have recently fallen, it's true. As it turns out, they are blue.
Gupta Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 4:03 AM
Very clever ... Congratulations on your beautiful win, Jean ...
Murray Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 4:26 AM
Hello again Probir. Lovely to see you. I've been AWOL but busy with babies being born, just like Jesus.
Roper Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 7:21 PM
wonderful monoku, Jean, congratulations on your win Hugs eve ~`*
Murray Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 4:22 AM
Thank you Eve.
Andresen Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 12:09 PM
- Hi Jean, congratulations on your winning line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Murray Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 5:09 PM
Thank you as always Anna-Lise.
Gauthier Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 11:15 AM
Adorable monoku. Lovely win, Jean.
Murray Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 11:52 AM
Thank you Line.
Callus Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 10:23 AM
Very lovely and romantic, Jean. Was it Frank Sinatra, Niall Horan or Paul Newman!? Congratulations on this podium finish! Regards // paul
Murray Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 11:52 AM
Thank you Paul. Well, Niall is Irish but a little too young for me. Good guess though.
One Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 8:20 AM
Must have been some eyes.. Congratulations on your placement in the colours monoku contest
Murray Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 8:27 AM
Thank you Silent. They were HUGE! I had trouble coming up for air!! .
Smith Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 8:31 AM
Very sweet.
Murray Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 8:57 AM
Just like you .....for seeing me through....into the New Year Tim.
Kannan Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 6:56 AM
This is so cute and beautiful... Loved it...
Murray Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 7:06 AM
Thank you Supraja.
Bauer Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 5:22 PM
ooh - very good, jean! i like this one...
Murray Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 5:32 PM
Thank you Ilene.
Michael Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 4:16 PM
A love monoku... Lovely Jean...Back in action
Murray Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 4:22 PM
Thank you Arturo, on both counts.
Andresen Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 2:53 PM
- Nice one, Jean :) - Luck in the contest - Happy New Year - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Murray Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 3:14 PM
Hello Anna-Lise! I was working over Xmas and New Year. Were you? I'm off for nine days now, so I hope the juices will flow. Best wishes for your new year.
Murray Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 3:14 PM
Hello Anna-Lise! I was working over Xmas and New Year. Were you? I'm off for nine days now, so I hope the juices will flow. Best wishes for your new year.
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