Blue

i was blue, until I fell into the blue of your eyes.

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David Smith

Date: 1/15/2018 2:07:00 PM

I like this very much. Glad to see you posting in 2018 Jean. Hope 2018 is a good year for you. Best regards David in NZ

Jean Murray
Date: 1/15/2018 3:00:00 PM

Hi David. I miss NZ and the folks I met in Hawera. Every Xmas since 1984 a midwife turned artist, Jenny Bielawski and I exchange greetings. I have renewed my membership here for another two years, so hopefully my pen will not let me down too much. Thank you for stopping by to say Hello.

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/6/2018 8:21:00 PM

Oh Jean, this is so beautifully romantic and heartfelt. Just lovely.. Congratulations for your wonderful win! Warmest wishes ~Susan

Jean Murray
Date: 1/8/2018 2:27:00 PM

Fingers crossed. It's early days and my track record is not so hot Susan.

Susan Ashley
Date: 1/7/2018 8:42:00 AM

Ohh Jean, I'm so happy for your recent joy. May your romance bloom with blue amaranthine splendor :))

Jean Murray
Date: 1/7/2018 4:07:00 AM

Thank you Susan. After seven years of dating website hell, I have met a lovely local man. Brought up on an island off the coast, there is not a devious bone in his body. Romance is definitely in the air.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2018 8:54:00 PM

oh, this is really cool, Jean. Love how you think. Congrats on your win.

Jean Murray
Date: 1/6/2018 3:23:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. My subconscious wants to use poetry to articulate how I think......I think.

Lu Loo

Date: 1/5/2018 1:14:00 PM

awww how sweet, congrats sweet Jean : ) -luloo

Jean Murray
Date: 1/5/2018 2:37:00 PM

Thank you Laura.I have recently fallen, it's true. As it turns out, they are blue.

Probir Gupta

Date: 1/5/2018 4:03:00 AM

Very clever ... Congratulations on your beautiful win, Jean ...

Jean Murray
Date: 1/5/2018 4:26:00 AM

Hello again Probir. Lovely to see you. I've been AWOL but busy with babies being born, just like Jesus.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/4/2018 7:21:00 PM

wonderful monoku, Jean, congratulations on your win Hugs eve ~`*

Jean Murray
Date: 1/5/2018 4:22:00 AM

Thank you Eve.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/4/2018 12:09:00 PM

- Hi Jean, congratulations on your winning line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray
Date: 1/4/2018 5:09:00 PM

Thank you as always Anna-Lise.

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/4/2018 11:15:00 AM

Adorable monoku. Lovely win, Jean.

Jean Murray
Date: 1/4/2018 11:52:00 AM

Thank you Line.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/4/2018 10:23:00 AM

Very lovely and romantic, Jean. Was it Frank Sinatra, Niall Horan or Paul Newman!? Congratulations on this podium finish! Regards // paul

Jean Murray
Date: 1/4/2018 11:52:00 AM

Thank you Paul. Well, Niall is Irish but a little too young for me. Good guess though.

Silent One

Date: 1/4/2018 8:20:00 AM

Must have been some eyes.. Congratulations on your placement in the colours monoku contest

Jean Murray
Date: 1/4/2018 8:27:00 AM

Thank you Silent. They were HUGE! I had trouble coming up for air!! .

Tim Smith

Date: 1/3/2018 8:31:00 AM

Very sweet.

Jean Murray
Date: 1/3/2018 8:57:00 AM

Just like you .....for seeing me through....into the New Year Tim.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 1/3/2018 6:56:00 AM

This is so cute and beautiful... Loved it...

Jean Murray
Date: 1/3/2018 7:06:00 AM

Thank you Supraja.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/2/2018 5:22:00 PM

ooh - very good, jean! i like this one...

Jean Murray
Date: 1/2/2018 5:32:00 PM

Thank you Ilene.

Arturo Michael

Date: 1/2/2018 4:16:00 PM

A love monoku... Lovely Jean...Back in action

Jean Murray
Date: 1/2/2018 4:22:00 PM

Thank you Arturo, on both counts.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/2/2018 2:53:00 PM

- Nice one, Jean :) - Luck in the contest - Happy New Year - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray
Date: 1/2/2018 3:14:00 PM

Hello Anna-Lise! I was working over Xmas and New Year. Were you? I'm off for nine days now, so I hope the juices will flow. Best wishes for your new year.

Jean Murray
Date: 1/2/2018 3:14:00 PM

Hello Anna-Lise! I was working over Xmas and New Year. Were you? I'm off for nine days now, so I hope the juices will flow. Best wishes for your new year.