Lenna Walker Poet Rhyme

Blue

Blue is so pretty 
Blue is so deep
Blue is the color
I see when I sleep
Blue can be light
Blue can be dark
I like the sky blue 
I see at the park

(entered into the juvenilia competition) 8th Place
(Rhyming poem school assignment - Age 11)

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Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer May 25, 2017 at 5:20 AM I love the subject - colour is fundamental to the world. Lenna Walker May 25, 2017 at 11:33 AM Thank You kindly Cecelia :) I am thrilled to have been placed in the top 10 :)

Keith Osborne May 1, 2017 at 8:58 PM Very well written at such a young age. The meter is wonderful and it's so light and fun. Thank you for sharing your early work. Keith Osborne May 2, 2017 at 2:55 PM I would have to disagree with that teacher. I suffer from VERY vivid dreams - at times in colour. I think, at eleven, you may have had an insight that few experience, at any age. Lenna Walker May 2, 2017 at 10:31 AM Thank You Keith :) I had little knowledge when I wrote it other than the rhyme part required for my assignment. It was fun then and still is. (except my teacher said we do not dream in color) who knew? at 11? Thank you for your support.

Chris Green May 1, 2017 at 5:53 PM That is so good for 11 years old. And still the meter is smooth and the rhymes nicely done. I enjoyed this Lenna. Lenna Walker May 1, 2017 at 6:14 PM Thank You Chris :) My teacher chose mine to read to the class, although embarrassing at the time, it was also encouraging for me. (probably why I saved this one)