Blue

Liquid sand invites eyes through
Painted sky was chosen blue
Don't you care no one cares for you?
Cares for who?
I'm sand and blue.

bluerhyme

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Afolabi Muideen

August 2, 2015 at 10:00 AM

A wonderful write to wellcome yourself to the great community where you will meet variety of peoples who are willing and ready to support by giving you positive feedback. Also is a place where you will lean and be sharpened by reading others poetry. I would like to make friend with you, also I will be looking forward to see read much of your wonderful write. Hope you don't mind to check me up.........A.M.

Shadow Hamilton

April 18, 2015 at 5:12 AM

hi Evan congrats on being featured hugs 7

Skat A

April 4, 2015 at 8:15 PM

EVAN, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

March 31, 2015 at 7:16 PM

Evan, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@