Blue

I am soft and serine I am a color that's been seen. A whisper in your ear peaceful sounds you will hear. Like the sea sometimes I roar as I hit the shore. For I am the color blue and I am all around you. JSergi Contest: The Sound of Color

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Muhereza Rodgers Roger

Date: 11/25/2013 10:31:00 PM

You cant post this to a girl friend, propose and she walks a way..I will try and see

Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/3/2013 8:59:00 PM

Thanks Rodgers for your comment

Cherl Dunn

Date: 11/25/2013 5:21:00 PM

Nicely written i can see the color, blue thanks for sharing this with me, also i'm glad you enjoy my poe

Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/3/2013 9:00:00 PM

Glad you like this one Cheri

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/25/2013 1:56:00 PM

- A lovely poem, Joseph. - Wish you luck in the contest. (I have chosen "Yellow boots sings") - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/3/2013 9:01:00 PM

Thank you Anne Lise I did read your Yellow boots sing I am sure you have a win with it.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/25/2013 11:56:00 AM

Reads like winning material..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments were uplifting..Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/4/2013 5:37:00 AM

Only the judge of the contest can give the reward but I enjoyed reading it..I like the color blue as well..Sara

Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/3/2013 9:01:00 PM

Thanks Sara hope your right. Glad I was uplifting for you