Blue

B aring tootsies in wall to wall teal; daring to be L evitated with auspicious fairy dust, brought U nderneath cerulean canopy of Arcadia E nveloped by a buxom-y blueberry field

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/27/2024 7:30:00 PM

I like your version of 'blue' better than all those 'blues songs.' They ain't got no class is what. ~ George Gershwin

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/28/2024 5:30:00 AM

I see you on stage…lol

Paige Hind

Date: 5/27/2024 5:45:00 PM

What an image you have created, delightful writing...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/28/2024 5:30:00 AM

Thank you, Paige!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/24/2024 4:04:00 PM

a creative Acrostic....especially liked 'auspicious fairy dust.' A delight to read. Wishing you a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/24/2024 4:15:00 PM

Glad you liked that part! Hugs ~ Kim

Silent One

Date: 5/24/2024 12:09:00 PM

Nicely done dear Kim..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/24/2024 4:16:00 PM

Thank you, dear friend!

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 5/24/2024 9:32:00 AM

Lovely write adore blue many blessings

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/24/2024 4:17:00 PM

Glad that blue is a favorite of yours. Many blessings your way!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/24/2024 9:10:00 AM

Your "Blue" is a creative Acrostic write. Have a wonderful day/weekend...............

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/24/2024 4:18:00 PM

Glad you found my acrostic creative! Thank you, my friend!