Blown Away

The winds of despair have made an appearance again I am afraid they will remain here forever this time They have whisked away the souls of many men Now it is here to finally take mine I stand tall to face them Deeply rooted like a tree I will fight my hardest with the very little that is left in me

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/10/2009 2:59:00 PM

i feel the wind:)with the very little that is left in me i rise as whole--:)well penned very well penned--charma

Ciara Aiyana Ashley-Garn

Date: 7/14/2009 5:29:00 PM

that was beautiful! i loved it! great write! i love how it flows and how each line is a story of its own and with each story it still blends in with each other...lovely! Ciara=)