Blowing In My Face

Blowing In My Face
I Walked a mile in your shoe's today, just
to feel the wind blowing in my face. Just 
wanted to talk to you and remember the smile
you always put on my face,As I try to shake
off this sorrow in my heart.

You have 
still stolen a piece of my heart,That part 
of my heart is still locked behind a closed 
door,Sealed with a kiss.

As I dial up 
your face just to see you smile, and feel my
feet picking up the pace, getting ready for
that mile,kicking dirt from behind,
So once
again I can feel the wind blowing in my 
face, As I feel your kiss upon my face

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 3/30/2009 5:04:00 AM
A very emotional piece. It's during these time as I walk I listen for the answer blowing in the wind. Great write continue to share.
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Date: 3/25/2009 8:29:00 AM
Right there just like that you gave this poem depth in the line: "kicking dirt from behind" Thanks for sharing, love and peace
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Date: 3/25/2009 5:10:00 AM
A write of hope and longing to reach and recapture a place within a moment of serenities love and light, within anothers being wapped amid the hearts longings of whom they are unto Your very own precious soul!!!:):) Wonderful write of deepest expressions Cheryl~Very well penned!!!:):)
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