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Blowing Bubbles

air
bubbles
candescent
deliciously
etched



AP: 2nd place 2022

Submitted on March 29, 2019 for contest LIGHT UP THE PAGE 4 sponsored by JOSEPH MAY  -  RANKED 4TH
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Callus Avatar
April 28, 2019 at 4:37 AM
Your winning entry projects a lovely image, Line. ~ Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
Gauthier Avatar
April 28, 2019 at 6:53 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Paul.
Dietrich Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 1:55 PM
this is so pretty. Congrats on your win.
Gauthier Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 3:18 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Much appreciated.
May Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 1:37 PM
Wonderful write Line...Congrats on your win...
Gauthier Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 3:19 PM
Thanks, Joseph. Much appreciated.
Sands Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 1:31 PM
Congratulations for your win :)
Gauthier Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 3:19 PM
Thanks, Heidi. Much appreciated.
Andresen Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 12:57 PM
- Congratulations, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 3:19 PM
Thanks, Sunshine. Much appreciated.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 9:44 AM
Delicate; to me this is "real" Poetry, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 9:58 AM
Thanks, Caren.
Godwin Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 12:36 AM
Pretty! Takes some thinking, doesn't it? BUT it is the fun kind of thinking and you did a splendid job. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Gauthier Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 9:59 AM
Thanks, CayCay.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 9:20 AM
Nice!
Gauthier Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 9:21 AM
Thanks,, Kim.
Kiser Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 8:36 AM
This was an amazing read! Like little balls of incandescent light, etched upon the air. Beautiful.
Gauthier Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 8:52 AM
Thanks, ML. Much appreciated.
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