Blow

I want to take away your pain and blow it away into the wind. I want to blow off the dust covering you and make you new again. For we all get dust on ourselves once in a while, just like a floor gets dirty, But this time I will sweep up your dust. That way you will be new in your eyes even though in my eyes you have always been.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/26/2012 12:27:00 PM

Really good words and beautifully written. - Thank you. Have a pleasant weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Christina Wiliams
Date: 10/26/2012 3:21:00 PM

Aww, no thank you for taking the time to read it. I really appreciate it. Have a pleasant weekend also. :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/26/2012 11:01:00 AM

I really liked how you used the word "blow" here, Christina. Ah, don't we all need somebody like this in our lives. Beautiful message.

Christina Wiliams
Date: 10/26/2012 3:21:00 PM

I am really glad you liked it and thanks for taking the time to read my poem. :)