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Blossoms Collection

pretty pink blossoms
 hanging  over the water  ~
 swans trailed by ripples

 ducks touch down on lake
 blossoms fall in the water ~
  wispy clouds sail by

 blooms glide on ripples
 water reflects azure sky ~
 fish nibble blossoms

 9-22-2022
 A Haiku Collection Of Three - Nature Themed Poetry Contest
 Tania Kitchin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Thomas Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 5:06 PM
Your words match the image beautifully Joseph :)
Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 11:02 AM
~ Congratulations on your winning poem ~
Dietrich Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 8:22 AM
Yours was one that I really liked a lot, Joseph. Glad to finally see it on a winner list. Congrats to you.
Kendrick Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 7:32 AM
Back with congratulations on this great winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara
Poet Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 6:45 AM
Back with congratulations on your well-deserved win, Joseph.
Y. Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 5:58 AM
Hi Joseph, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your win. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
Sands Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 5:49 AM
Congratulations for your win Joseph :)
Kitchin Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 5:36 AM
Joe, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful and serene poems!
Dietrich Avatar
October 7, 2022 at 11:54 PM
gosh, I am still waiting to see a winners' list for the collection poems. Just came upon this one again and admiring it.
Chiri Avatar
October 1, 2022 at 12:32 AM
Joseph its been awhile since ive read you! Amf I see you still do mot disappoint my friend! Great work!;)
Kendrick Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 7:48 AM
Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Love those swans. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Y. Avatar
September 27, 2022 at 2:49 PM
WoW! Joseph, This is just lovely. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
Sands Avatar
September 27, 2022 at 11:31 AM
I love this beautiful collection. A Fave for me. :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 25, 2022 at 8:35 PM
wow, this is a REAL gem. I would place it high if I were a judge. Love it.
Rose  Avatar
September 25, 2022 at 4:31 AM
such beauty ought to be remembered, especially this time of year when the weather is cooling and the swans are sliding away, nicely done Joseph, thank you for sharing this have a blessed day
Poet Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 8:05 AM
Joseph, your haiku sequence conjures such lovely pictures with the words you choose. I wish you the best of luck.
Legros Kelley Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 2:50 AM
This painted such pretty pictures, I love these sweet haikus!
Nicole Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 7:35 PM
Those *pretty pink blossoms* always leave me in complete awe, and your thoughts are so dreamy. This is beautiful in every way, my dear friend. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
May Avatar
September 29, 2022 at 11:25 AM
Thank you Brandy, glad you liked my poem, hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 5:39 AM
Great imagery and perfect haikus.
May Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 8:25 AM
Thank you Victor, glad you liked it
Rodrigues Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 4:42 AM
Beautiful! Love it, Joe!
May Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 8:24 AM
Thank you Kim, Glad you enjoyed it
Pandit Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 4:23 AM
Lovely display of blossoms on lake frolicking with swans and ducks. Best to you, Joseph.
May Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 8:24 AM
Thank you Vijay, Glad you liked it
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September 22, 2022 at 6:00 PM
A lovely Haiku trio Joseph and the picture is beautiful… Belle
May Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 8:23 AM
Thank you Belle, Glad you liked it
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