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Blossoms and Rain

Range
    Of hues,
    Silk petals 
    Emanate sweet
    Scent

   Blooms
   Leap out
   On branches
   Opulence in 
   May


 
   Skies
   Promise
   Rain showers
   Infers thunder's
   Noise,
   Grass
  Remains
  All soaked in
  Intense rainfall
  Now

  3-16-19

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Eve Roper

Date: 11/14/2023 6:51:00 PM

Great imagery of nature. Enjoyed reading my friend.

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/13/2019 4:50:00 PM

This is great! I like how you did this :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2019 7:13:00 PM

I especially like the first one , Joseph. I do not always get excited on the sponsors' types of contests here but I am really liking your lanterne contests and how you are making them a bit challenging at the same time. I notice not many are doing first and last word contrasted or related or whatever. It does not matter in lanterne?

Joseph May
Date: 3/17/2019 8:17:00 PM

Thank you Andrea, yes it does matter, I hope more poets will do it that way.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 3/17/2019 4:59:00 PM

I like the acrostic, because it doesn't jump out at the reader.

Joseph May
Date: 3/17/2019 8:15:00 PM

Thank you Agnes, glad you liked it

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/17/2019 8:43:00 AM

Wow! Brilliant lanterne Acrostic, Joseph:)

Joseph May
Date: 3/17/2019 7:59:00 PM

Thank you Jo

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/17/2019 7:48:00 AM

Lovely blooms of roses..well written, Joseph.

Joseph May
Date: 3/17/2019 7:59:00 PM

Thank you Vijay

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/17/2019 2:35:00 AM

I love this Joseph. I am putting it into my faves! xxoo

Joseph May
Date: 3/17/2019 7:05:00 AM

Thank you so much for making it a fave Connie..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/16/2019 6:40:00 PM

My mother always said April showers bring May flowers. Though rain may intrude on outdoor plans sometimes, we have to remember how much the blossoms need this nourishment. Well done acrostic, Joseph! Best wishes, Carolyn

Joseph May
Date: 3/16/2019 8:23:00 PM

So true Carolyn, thank you for your comments..