Blossoms and Bubbles

In a magical forest among the purple ice plants
     the queen fairy floats by inside a bubble and chants

     "Come to me all fairy lights and play softly among your flutes"
     hundreds of fairies fly to her in a great multitude they swoop

     Soft music from the fairies make the flowers start to sway 
     bending low and high reaching for the sky they splay

     The flowers bouncing each bubble with a fairy inside 
     giving each a beautiful and peaceful joy ride. 

    T Reams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dalei Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 7:42 AM
Tammy, A wonderful poem on flowers. Amazing imagery & outstanding lay out. I enjoyed every line. Super 7 from me & a fav...........hugs
Horn Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 4:25 PM
Okay Tammy tell me true what is splay? Is it something you do everyday being poetic. You are starting to get a god feel for poetry and are becoming an artistic poet like Richard and I are. Jim Horn
Reams Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 5:28 PM
Splay- to spread out, expand, or extend,. To spread or flare. Hope this helps you. It is a real word. Thanks for the comment.
Pinet Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 10:37 AM
This is full of fun and adventure offering the allure of fantasy to the child within us. Emile.
Reams Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 11:01 AM
Thank you Emile for nice comment.
Haight Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 9:35 AM
Tammy, what a sweet mythical image you create through your words. I love the interplay between the fairies and flowers--so magical. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Reams Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 11:00 AM
Thank you Sandra for the sweet comment.
Shaw Avatar
April 1, 2015 at 7:21 PM
Hi Tammy! This is a magical, mythical joy to read! Best of luck in the contest!! Hugs, Kimberly
Reams Avatar
April 1, 2015 at 7:30 PM
Thank you Kimberly. All I could think about was fairies in the pictures.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 1, 2015 at 7:07 PM
This is so much fun! I am a sucker for fantasy writes.
Reams Avatar
April 1, 2015 at 7:29 PM
Thank you Richard. The pictures looked magical to me.
Onclaud Avatar
March 31, 2015 at 4:50 AM
ohh, i like how you treated the theme using myth and fantasy,tammy.. very fine work!.. huggs
Reams Avatar
March 31, 2015 at 1:30 PM
Thank you very much Nette for the sweet comment!
Wilson Avatar
March 31, 2015 at 12:30 AM
so beautiful! Hugs, Deb
Reams Avatar
March 31, 2015 at 1:29 PM
Thank you very much Deb for the sweet comment!
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