Jenish Somadas Poet Senryu

Blossoming Love

Boy :
deep beneath the veil
behind creaking songs of mouth -
felt fragrance of love

Girl :
nah! torpor dreamer
fret over your own fancies -
stars won't shine the day

Boy :
rain sweeping over
pall of clouds hiding the sun -
still I waits the smile

Girl :
before thunder knocks
lightning burns the tweet of love-
not the right day out

Boy :
burned pile of ashes
blown by the low moaning wind -
shines the fire of love

Girl :
fling of youthful love
swayed faded chintz of my mind -
stony heart melted

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Heidi Sands August 9, 2020 at 4:10 PM This is so nice Jenish. Well done :) Jenish Somadas August 9, 2020 at 10:08 PM Thank you Heidi..

Gershon Wolf August 3, 2020 at 7:12 AM Wow! This is a knockout poem, so in sync with the innocence of the photo... Looks like we both took a little break from P.S. at the same time (07/27)... I just came back a wee bit earlier, I very much hope --- to see your intriguing writes again soon, my friend! Blessings, Gershon Jenish Somadas August 4, 2020 at 10:20 PM Thank you Gershon for your support.. Yes, I also took a short vacation from PS...lol..

Harry Horsman July 30, 2020 at 6:40 PM wonderful poetry, love the innocence of your purpose of poems. Love 'still i waits the smile' Jenish Somadas July 30, 2020 at 9:38 PM Thank you Harry for your kind support and delightful words..

Shirley Hawkins July 29, 2020 at 3:54 AM I loved the Poem, especially the title it is so explicit.... and the last three lines... Real Poetry...Beautifully penned... Thank you Jenish... Jenish Somadas July 29, 2020 at 8:55 PM Thank you Shirley for these delightful words..Have a great day..

Andrea Dietrich July 28, 2020 at 4:59 PM what a wonderful ending, melting of the stony heart. Very well done, Jenish. Jenish Somadas July 28, 2020 at 9:30 PM Thank you Andrea for your kind support..Have a great day..

Panagiota Romios July 28, 2020 at 12:22 PM A very creative write. Using boy then girl )))) Fantastic Senryus Loved it Panagiota xx Jenish Somadas July 28, 2020 at 9:31 PM Thank you Panagiota for those delightful words..Have a great day..

V. Deepa July 28, 2020 at 11:25 AM I am inspired by the blossoming love which melts a Stony heart.Splendid imagery jenish sir.:-)Loved the little ones in the photo too.:-)Keep inspiring. My best wishes to you.Take care.Warmest regards sent to you.:-) Jenish Somadas July 28, 2020 at 9:32 PM Thank you Deepa for your unconditional support..Have a great day..

Demetrios Trifiatis July 28, 2020 at 5:25 AM A neckless of precious Senryu, dearest Jenish! Good luck my friend! Excellently done! Jenish Somadas July 28, 2020 at 5:30 AM Thank you Demetrios for those fine words.. I'm delighted..

Vijay Pandit July 28, 2020 at 5:03 AM This is one of your best, Jenish! Excellent creation. Jenish Somadas July 28, 2020 at 5:29 AM Thank you Vijay... You made my day..

Anisha Dutta July 28, 2020 at 4:50 AM Beautiful Both the picture and composition. Hugs. Jenish Somadas July 28, 2020 at 5:29 AM Thank you Anisha for the support..

Judy Ball July 28, 2020 at 3:30 AM Love the picture here. It so sweet with the little girl and boy walking together toward the day. Whatever the meet it will be together. Lovely God Bless, JB Jenish Somadas July 28, 2020 at 3:34 AM Thank you Judy for the delightful comment.. Have a great day..

Eve Roper July 27, 2020 at 10:51 PM WoW! stunning Jenish Somadas July 28, 2020 at 3:33 AM Thank you Eve..

Unseeking Seeker July 27, 2020 at 10:27 PM Wow! Jenish Somadas July 28, 2020 at 3:33 AM Thank you..