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Blossoming Love

Boy :
deep beneath the veil
behind creaking songs of mouth -
felt fragrance of love

Girl :
nah! torpor dreamer
fret over your own fancies -
stars won't shine the day

Boy :
rain sweeping over
pall of clouds hiding the sun -
still I waits the smile

Girl :
before thunder knocks
lightning burns the tweet of love-
not the right day out

Boy :
burned pile of ashes
blown by the low moaning wind -
shines the fire of love

Girl :
fling of youthful love
swayed faded chintz of my mind -
stony heart melted

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Heidi Sands

Date: 8/9/2020 4:10:00 PM

This is so nice Jenish. Well done :)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 8/9/2020 10:08:00 PM

Thank you Heidi..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/3/2020 7:12:00 AM

Wow! This is a knockout poem, so in sync with the innocence of the photo... Looks like we both took a little break from P.S. at the same time (07/27)... I just came back a wee bit earlier, I very much hope --- to see your intriguing writes again soon, my friend! Blessings, Gershon

Jenish Somadas
Date: 8/4/2020 10:20:00 PM

Thank you Gershon for your support.. Yes, I also took a short vacation from PS...lol..

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/30/2020 6:40:00 PM

wonderful poetry, love the innocence of your purpose of poems. Love 'still i waits the smile'

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/30/2020 9:38:00 PM

Thank you Harry for your kind support and delightful words..

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 7/29/2020 3:54:00 AM

I loved the Poem, especially the title it is so explicit.... and the last three lines... Real Poetry...Beautifully penned... Thank you Jenish...

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/29/2020 8:55:00 PM

Thank you Shirley for these delightful words..Have a great day..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/28/2020 4:59:00 PM

what a wonderful ending, melting of the stony heart. Very well done, Jenish.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/28/2020 9:30:00 PM

Thank you Andrea for your kind support..Have a great day..

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/28/2020 12:22:00 PM

A very creative write. Using boy then girl )))) Fantastic Senryus Loved it Panagiota xx

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/28/2020 9:31:00 PM

Thank you Panagiota for those delightful words..Have a great day..

V. Deepa

Date: 7/28/2020 11:25:00 AM

I am inspired by the blossoming love which melts a Stony heart.Splendid imagery jenish sir.:-)Loved the little ones in the photo too.:-)Keep inspiring. My best wishes to you.Take care.Warmest regards sent to you.:-)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/28/2020 9:32:00 PM

Thank you Deepa for your unconditional support..Have a great day..

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/28/2020 5:25:00 AM

A neckless of precious Senryu, dearest Jenish! Good luck my friend! Excellently done!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/28/2020 5:30:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios for those fine words.. I'm delighted..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/28/2020 5:03:00 AM

This is one of your best, Jenish! Excellent creation.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/28/2020 5:29:00 AM

Thank you Vijay... You made my day..

Anisha Dutta

Date: 7/28/2020 4:50:00 AM

Beautiful Both the picture and composition. Hugs.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/28/2020 5:29:00 AM

Thank you Anisha for the support..

Judy Ball

Date: 7/28/2020 3:30:00 AM

Love the picture here. It so sweet with the little girl and boy walking together toward the day. Whatever the meet it will be together. Lovely God Bless, JB

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/28/2020 3:34:00 AM

Thank you Judy for the delightful comment.. Have a great day..