Blossoming Bloom

Awaking flower fresh presence to dawn
Potential blossoming but falls
Charming beauty exquisitely forms
Beaming up higher leaving the floor
Flower to the sun grasping for more
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 4, 2011 at 9:07 PM
Claire, if i was a flower i would definitely reach up to touch the radiant sun... stand tall so all can see my beauty .. and enjoy the freshness of life... well I'm only human... so my complexion is not blooming... like your beautiful poem.. enjoyed,..p.d.
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May 4, 2011 at 6:31 PM
beautiful piece of poetry with apt images, Claire
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May 4, 2011 at 2:26 PM
this was very well written it has a great flow to it. congratulations on your feature of the week. cory
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