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Blooms and Birdsongs

Although snow is still on the ground Winter's reign is about to end Spring will soon come around Blooms and birdsongs will be the trend Daffodils in golden hues In crimson shades tulips rise Lilacs give us pretty purple views As hyacinths in pink arise 3-13-2024

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/19/2024 9:20:00 PM

This is a gorgeous little spring poem, Joseph.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/15/2024 7:08:00 PM

In my world, birds are softly singing and daffodils are already in bloom. I just love spring ! :) Your thoughts bring a smile, Joseph. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/14/2024 12:42:00 PM

I look forward to this very much. Beautiful poem. :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/14/2024 8:58:00 AM

You alluded to some beautiful flowers. Soon they will be very popular as the season gets warm.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/13/2024 5:26:00 PM

your poem was captivating with its descriptive words. Loved 'daffodils in golden hues' Our daffodils bloomed weeks ago and have wilted somewhat. Early spring here. Your rhyme scheme flowed effortlessly as does spring days :-) enjoy your evening, Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/13/2024 1:50:00 PM

- Snowdrops and crocuses are already in bloom... a lovely time and a lovely poem, Joseph :) - hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 3/13/2024 10:23:00 AM

How soul warming and beautiful is this, so descriptive and so creative how youv made your lines flow with such captivating imagery. I especially loved the lines “In crimson shades tulips rise Lilacs give us pretty purple views As hyacinths in pink arise” your use of colors and flowers makes this stand out for me. So artistic. Pleasure reading your work

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/13/2024 10:04:00 AM

I enjoyed your poem. It was a colorful, uplifting beginning of a following story of Spring. I'm hoping for a sunny one.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/13/2024 8:07:00 AM

Looking forward to the blooming tulips, lilacs and daffodils. A joyful read, Joseph--reveling in spirit of spring.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/13/2024 7:47:00 AM

Excellent writing, Joseph, I can feel the Spring mood:)