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Blooming Summer

Daylights departure comes near Her colors are aroused on a pallet premier A dab of crimson and bitter orange too Mixed in with a paisley powdered blue Heavenly kissed dusted yellow A peculiar quiet covers the countryside mellow A blushing sundown has graced our presents Evening breezes whispering summers events Deep emerald lawns and well groomed trees Busy dancing crickets chirp with ease Eager bats take flight for a feast Nature stirring its pollen released Familiar kept associations of seasons in our minds Tranquil warm zephyr continues it’s unwind Bountiful maples call shadows in the twilight As two lovers hold close under the emerging moon light

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/23/2009 6:07:00 PM
Nice use of imagery for a creative view. Love the thought in the 5th line. Good job! Thank you for taking time to comment on my poem. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen
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Date: 5/23/2009 4:04:00 PM
Awesome!! You are a splendiferous writer ... smile ... I love your colors and the "warm zephyr" is a great choice ... WOW
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Date: 5/21/2009 6:26:00 PM
You've taken us to a magical place in this lovely poem, Laura..a peaceful place one would never want to leave. Wonderful image in my dreams! ~ Carrie
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Date: 5/21/2009 3:37:00 PM
Laura, I almost feel as though I stepped into the pages of a children's book into an enchanted land, and yet, I know you are writing about a beautiful reality you have seen. Your words are magic as they paint a picture of many glories to behold of this amazing season. Delightful and as magical as nature can be. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/21/2009 1:34:00 PM
My dear lady..I adore this write..the colors are awesome.... the music that the ryhming makes is incredible and the moonlight dance a great beat...wonderful write.
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Date: 5/21/2009 12:55:00 PM
Hi Laura Oh what a mesmerizing nature serenade you have written here! I just love it. Your elequent words coupled with the amazing rythem and ryhme makes this a sheer delight to read. Truly enjoyed. Take care hun Love Light Truth Patricia
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