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Bloom

Springtime explosion, Petals erupt on branches: Prismatic landscapes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/1/2013 9:11:00 AM
A perfect spring haiku.......(I love the "prismatic" description......so unique!!
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Date: 3/22/2013 12:36:00 AM
This form of haiku is unique... it seems to thrive off of vivid descriptions. I really liked the words you chose like explosion and erupt... made me think of flowers as less delicate, and much more like a survivor of a harsh winter. Loved this!
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Date: 3/21/2013 5:20:00 PM
Nice image Raul
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Date: 3/19/2013 1:29:00 PM
Beautiful described, Raul! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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