Bloom

Springtime explosion,
Petals erupt on branches:
Prismatic landscapes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Richards Avatar
April 1, 2013 at 9:11 AM
A perfect spring haiku.......(I love the "prismatic" description......so unique!!
Hicks Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 12:36 AM
This form of haiku is unique... it seems to thrive off of vivid descriptions. I really liked the words you chose like explosion and erupt... made me think of flowers as less delicate, and much more like a survivor of a harsh winter. Loved this!
Chircop Avatar
March 21, 2013 at 5:20 PM
Nice image Raul
Andresen Avatar
March 19, 2013 at 1:29 PM
Beautiful described, Raul! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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