Stacy Wampler Poet Rhyme

Bloody Red Roses Part 2

She lies in a pile of bloody red roses

She left a note to her folks  saying

" I cant go on im sorry"

      It didnt say why

But still we cry

      We are all very sad

some of us are mad

       none of us are glad

She'll b greatly missed

        To me she was like a sis

But when will the rumors stop

        Noone knows the truth not even the cops

My pain is great 

       I wish we hadnt been late

But when we got there 

        there she lay 

on her already made bed of

Bloody red roses

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Pace Ink-U-Script April 4, 2013 at 3:54 PM I read your repsonse down below...very sad..You wrote this poem very well and creatively. Welcome to Poetry Soup!! Hope to read more soon. :) Stacy Wampler April 4, 2013 at 3:59 PM thank you i was like 14 when i wrote part 1 n 2 was the only way i could deal w the tragedy of losing 2 very good friends.... ty for reading my work

Painted Hunter April 4, 2013 at 10:34 AM I'm sensing now that this is from a true account...very painful...but great poetry. Well done. Stacy Wampler April 4, 2013 at 10:59 AM yes they are things that really happend... back when i was in hs way back in 94/95 i had 2 friends who had a suicide pact n pulled the trigger on each other.... even tho it was ions ago it was a truely tragic event that still rings in my head ty for taking the time to read my poetry.. <3