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Bloody Red Roses Part 2

She lies in a pile of bloody red roses She left a note to her folks saying " I cant go on im sorry" It didnt say why But still we cry We are all very sad some of us are mad none of us are glad She'll b greatly missed To me she was like a sis But when will the rumors stop Noone knows the truth not even the cops My pain is great I wish we hadnt been late But when we got there there she lay on her already made bed of Bloody red roses

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/4/2013 3:54:00 PM
I read your repsonse down below...very sad..You wrote this poem very well and creatively. Welcome to Poetry Soup!! Hope to read more soon. :)
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Stacy Wampler
Date: 4/4/2013 3:59:00 PM
thank you i was like 14 when i wrote part 1 n 2 was the only way i could deal w the tragedy of losing 2 very good friends.... ty for reading my work
Date: 4/4/2013 10:34:00 AM
I'm sensing now that this is from a true account...very painful...but great poetry. Well done.
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Stacy Wampler
Date: 4/4/2013 10:59:00 AM
yes they are things that really happend... back when i was in hs way back in 94/95 i had 2 friends who had a suicide pact n pulled the trigger on each other.... even tho it was ions ago it was a truely tragic event that still rings in my head ty for taking the time to read my poetry.. <3

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