Bloody Red Roses Part 1

A shot rang out,

it became quiet,

         she tried to scream 

but out came nothing

         she tried to move

But she soon realized she was paralyzed with fear

         All of a sudden 

she saw herself 

        Looking down upon herself

She tried yelling for help

       But then she saw it

It was in her hand

       Then she realized she did something

something she promised herself she would never do

       Noone knows why she's gone 

Nor what happened

       All they know is that she pulled the trigger

on herself while layin in a bed of

Bloody Red Roses
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Hunter Avatar
April 4, 2013 at 10:32 AM
Yikes...strong piece from you here. I LOVE it! Welcome to the soup...Caleb
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April 4, 2013 at 11:02 AM
ty again!
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