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Bloodstreams

Tearing reality at the seams Buried beneath these taunting dreams Lost in countless data streams Principles chase my themes While promise redeems Woe's booming screams This lie reams Esteem's Schemes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 3/25/2009 12:32:00 PM
Nice opening line, Nice nonet in monorhyme...Raul
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Date: 12/28/2008 1:41:00 PM
Great Nonet, John. They're not easy to write - but this one is exceptional in theme and tone. Wishing you a Happy & Blessed New Year. Peace always, John
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