bloodline

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Nette Onclaud’s Monoklitteration May 30

bloodline broods begotten bots - banefully believing in brainwashed fibs

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Paige Hind

Date: 5/31/2025 3:33:00 PM

This is interesting- it seems AI is taking over, ugh

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2025 4:18:00 PM

All too much…back, back I say…giggle

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/30/2025 1:42:00 PM

Well-crafted with a lot of depth, Kim. I enjoyed reading your brevity. A fave for me

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/30/2025 2:36:00 PM

Thank you so much, dear friend!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/30/2025 12:25:00 PM

So original, Kim. I like this. Gotta hurry and try one myself

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/30/2025 12:28:00 PM

Thank you, sweet poet! Hurry Hurry

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/30/2025 11:52:00 AM

What a creative "bloodline" Monoku write. "Good Luck" We both did this contest. Have a lovely/fun day writing away..........

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/30/2025 12:28:00 PM

Thank you, Paula!

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 5/30/2025 4:51:00 AM

Like this Kim. You strung together some good alliteration.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/30/2025 7:36:00 AM

Thank you so much!