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'BLOODHOUND'

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'Bloodhound',

Heartbroken eyes,

Wags furry empennage,

Raises hopeful household, perhaps,

Baffled.



*Traditional Cinquain
2-4-6-8-2 Syllables
First line - title, last line - connects title

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 5/20/2019 4:27:00 AM
Short but well done. Aloha to you.
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William Kekaula
Date: 5/20/2019 4:55:00 AM
You have my thanks, Aloha wk
Date: 5/19/2019 10:25:00 AM
Finely described with brevity. Regards, Allen
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William Kekaula
Date: 5/19/2019 10:55:00 AM
Many thanks Allen, Aloha wk
Date: 5/19/2019 7:48:00 AM
They truly do always look baffled, like a woman who has lost her teeth and has no idea which glass they are in. I like the VIDEO so much. How do you do it please?
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Date: 5/19/2019 11:05:00 AM
Hehe, as far as video, now I'm baffled lest it is about another poem of mine--I believe I've 4 or 5 video poems that I've created, all save one, made prior to joining Soup--Nap Time I've made after joining Soup, again movie editing app that allows its users to create videos, such as those I've produced for my YouTube website, hoped it helped you Caren, Aloha wk