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Bloodened Tears

My Tears are thickened with blood My eyes are darkened by pain Numbness hides it all, so nothing more brings shame I never show how much it hurts, I'd rather drink it all away Drowned in unavoidable sorrow, like the cuts on my vain But one day I'll be free, to never drink again All that it really comes down to... Sorrow's my only friend who really understands

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/15/2011 11:36:00 AM
a sorrow so deep, enjoyed your write,..p.d.
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Date: 2/15/2011 6:25:00 AM
What a peace of writing it is! Heh, in fact you are just speaking the words I've been speaking for 3 years... But if i may say, have hope, cause indeed someday sorrow will fade and light will prevail.
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Date: 2/15/2011 6:23:00 AM
Sorrow's only purpose is to make you think it understands. It is a blinder to self. Intense & sad piece.
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Date: 2/15/2011 6:18:00 AM
Kind of sad..There is more to life than sadness and drowning that sadness..Sara
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