Blood Rushes Threw His Veins

As I sit next to him I cant help but to see his veins
Blood running thick within them I look and smile
He starts to fall into an endless sleep, all that's left is his remains
His body is full of empty veins as long as a mile
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Bagnato Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 6:24 PM
ummm i used it in a totally different meaning...
John Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 5:03 AM
just one change.....the title says threw...it shud be through
Brown Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 10:57 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured on PoetrySoup this weekAshley . Love, Carol
Situation Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 8:11 PM
it's a good start. T. S.
Palli Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 8:36 AM
welcome to the site! continue to write.
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December 14, 2010 at 4:46 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ashley. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Love, Carol
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