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Blood of My Pain

blood of my pain all i see is my grave stone ,words rest in pain for your standing over me crying all the words of wrong you said but it to late I'm f...ing dead so the pain runs through your head see laying in you bed all the bloodshed . the night walker sorry for the fword

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/15/2017 11:07:00 PM
Best wishes and congratulations on your win, Duncan - keep up the great work! :-)
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Date: 12/1/2017 8:02:00 AM
Potent penning, congratulations on your win! :) xomo
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Date: 12/1/2017 7:09:00 AM
Congrats on your win
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Date: 11/30/2017 8:18:00 PM
Congratulations Duncan, this poem stood out for me, so emotive, loved it
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Date: 11/7/2010 5:53:00 AM
Your feelings come through very clearly, Duncan! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/6/2010 7:55:00 PM
Such torment in this piece. A splendidly raw Verse.
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Date: 11/6/2010 4:37:00 PM
Don't be sorry for the expression it's all about expression. This is an excellent piece
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Date: 11/5/2010 6:13:00 AM
awww, no need to sorry some situations require harsh language! Light & Love
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