Duncan Chappell Poet Verse

Blood of My Pain

blood of my pain





all i see is my grave stone ,words rest in pain

for your standing over me crying

all the words of wrong you said

but it to late

I'm f...ing dead

so the pain runs through your head

see laying in you bed all the bloodshed .


the night walker               sorry for the fword

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Gregory Richard Barden December 15, 2017 at 11:07 PM Best wishes and congratulations on your win, Duncan - keep up the great work! :-)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 1, 2017 at 8:02 AM Potent penning, congratulations on your win! :) xomo

Brian Davey December 1, 2017 at 7:09 AM Congrats on your win

Lewis Raynes November 30, 2017 at 8:18 PM Congratulations Duncan, this poem stood out for me, so emotive, loved it

Carolyn Devonshire November 7, 2010 at 5:53 AM Your feelings come through very clearly, Duncan! Love, Carolyn

Kim Hilliker November 6, 2010 at 7:55 PM Such torment in this piece. A splendidly raw Verse.

Nicole Sharon Brown November 6, 2010 at 4:37 PM Don't be sorry for the expression it's all about expression. This is an excellent piece

Debbie Guzzi November 5, 2010 at 6:13 AM awww, no need to sorry some situations require harsh language! Light & Love