Karen Fitzpatrick Poet Villanelle

Blood Moon

Blood moon embraces the night
Flaming sky crimson glow
Words spoken end in sight

Darkness taking over a dying light
Dreams rest on a cloud of doubt
Blood moon embraces the night

Searching for souls wrong or right
As the silent night surrounds 
Words spoken end in sight

Blessed words reviled so bright
That sat souls afire
Blood moon embraces the night

Holding tight souls take to flight
Filling hearts and minds
Words reviled end in sight

Somewhere a peaceful height
Crimson sky did shine
Blood moon embraces the night
Words reviled end in sight
 

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Poet Destroyer A April 12, 2014 at 9:17 PM Karen ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. <3 =LINDA

Dr.Ram Mehta April 7, 2014 at 5:37 AM A brilliant write. Congratulations on your poem being featured this week , karen

Richard Waring March 20, 2014 at 6:10 PM This is really creative! Karen Fitzpatrick March 21, 2014 at 5:08 AM Thank you, I'm new to this site, but looking forward to reading some of your poems. Karen

Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2014 at 12:41 PM - Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Karen :) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A March 19, 2014 at 11:55 PM This is very deep, Karen:), A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@ Karen Fitzpatrick March 20, 2014 at 5:06 AM Thank you for your comments, and thank you for the offer to enter your contest. I love writing poetry. My boss got me started when he thought it would be benafical for me to take some english classes. What turned out to be something to help me in my job, turned out to be a love of writing poetry and my way of talking to God. Thank you for your support, Karen

Skat A March 19, 2014 at 9:53 AM Karen, beautiful poem, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT Karen Fitzpatrick March 19, 2014 at 10:59 AM Thank you, so much for your comment. 5 years ago I was told I had cancer. I started writing poetry, It made me feel good, I t was my way of talking to God. They now have my condition under control. I like writing poems, I may not be the best poet, but thats alright, if my poems reach out to someone, that makes me feel like I have acomplished something. Thanks new friend, Karen

Teresa Godwin March 19, 2014 at 9:09 AM Yes indeed, Crimson sky does shine and words reviled, oh precious end in SIGHT! Love it! Thanks for this. Hope. ~Teresa Karen Fitzpatrick March 19, 2014 at 11:01 AM Writing poems is like theropy for my soul. If I touch someone with what I write, then I feel like I have made a differents in someones life. Thanks for your comment, your new friend Karen