Blood Lust

I see it in you pumping.
I hear it in me swishing.
In my sleep I lose all thought.
In this state I scratch my face.
I do it just for some release.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 18, 2010 at 9:24 PM
Ahh, come on, man. U can do better than that, right? Throw u'r back into it!!! Get freakin' MAD!!!! Great thrust, but u didn't make me orgasm. (i was ALMOST there.....and u pulled out!?!)
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September 9, 2010 at 12:57 PM
Great stuff love it sarah x
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September 9, 2010 at 12:33 PM
Yes thank you Josh, you are right any one can be a poet. ***** wow! The words rush thru my blood, but i can not be sure what you mean, I can only assume. Enjoyed your poem...LeeAnn
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