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Blood Line

my family roots flange to three generations stand on a tripod the grace of values fondued by humble elders half here and half there the hopping second have tales full of humour vanishing the blues the out cradled babes tow blood line of bold and old exposing its veins May 6, 2016 Haiku on My Family For Marvin Celestial

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 5/14/2016 10:13:00 PM

Hi Balveen, i had to step by this one for i do Love the Haiku form. This set of Haiku are excellent. The set encapsulate your vision of the family. This is a definite seven for the content and it goes into my faves.

Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/14/2016 10:39:00 PM

Oh Vlad! Thank you so very much!

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/14/2016 5:14:00 PM

a lovely collection Balveen.

Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/14/2016 8:17:00 PM

Thanks Lenny!