Blood Battlefield

Conditioned to be concealed
A boy and his visage shield 

Anxious, scared, ashamed
A loser he self-proclaimed

A guardian, an angel, a mom
Angelic and motherly and calm

Confident, smart and charming
But sometimes crazy, alarming

With nine little ones you see
expect some screams, insanity

But in all seriousness you expect
Some might encounter neglect

But think not will my mom reject
for she possesses much respect

I'm lonely and sad and tired
And this summer I got fired

Mom looked at the happy side
To say I liked that job I lied

Last week I was in a fight
Blinded by new flawed light

Mom told me that the fight is life
It's a rusty broken butter knife

Like crazy fights with a crazy wife
She joked about her earlier strife

For my mom is single now 
But don't you raise a brow

She's tough and strong and mighty
With her substantial acts of piety

When I look at mom I break my shield
And conquer the entire battle field

Because when I see my mom in battle
It's her bravery that one cannot rattle

I am no longer conditioned to be concealed 
because my mom knows to fight, not shield

And that is why I love her.  
For she raised one brave soldier.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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September 13, 2015 at 10:00 PM
Chad, Congratulations on your wonderful win. LOVE SKAT
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September 12, 2015 at 4:44 AM
Eloquent write Chad! Congrats on superb win! There r find u r new to soup, warm welcome friend!
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September 7, 2015 at 5:28 PM
Hi Chad, a warm welcome to PoetrySoup! You are off to a great start with this wonderful tribute to your mom who raised you right! What a wonder woman! That's how I feel about my mom too! Well done and a score of 7! Pandita
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September 7, 2015 at 2:33 AM
Hi Chad, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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September 6, 2015 at 12:57 PM
Chad, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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September 6, 2015 at 10:01 PM
Hey, thanks! I write short stories to prompts on writers digest two, trying to eventually get published. Nice to meet you!
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