Blizzard

ice bullets thunder
disguised as snow in the wind
get thee behind me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 1, 2015 at 10:14 AM
Janet, wow,,, intimidating imagery. Love it. Linda
Meade Avatar
January 30, 2015 at 3:14 PM
Ah, very clever -- as the hail is masquerading as snow, so does Satan within Peter . . . my favorite so far.
Boebert Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 2:08 PM
Thank you - I had a different last line, changed it. This one fits best.
Allison Avatar
January 30, 2015 at 2:06 PM
Great descriptive haiku Janet:-) Hugs Jan xx
Boebert Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 2:09 PM
Thank you for the encouragement - I like haiku; the form suits my thinking. But it's still pretty new for me.
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