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Blizzard

ice bullets thunder disguised as snow in the wind get thee behind me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/1/2015 10:14:00 AM
Janet, wow,,, intimidating imagery. Love it. Linda
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Date: 1/30/2015 3:14:00 PM
Ah, very clever -- as the hail is masquerading as snow, so does Satan within Peter . . . my favorite so far.
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Janet Boebert
Date: 1/31/2015 2:08:00 PM
Thank you - I had a different last line, changed it. This one fits best.
Date: 1/30/2015 2:06:00 PM
Great descriptive haiku Janet:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Janet Boebert
Date: 1/31/2015 2:09:00 PM
Thank you for the encouragement - I like haiku; the form suits my thinking. But it's still pretty new for me.