Blizzard

ice bullets thunder disguised as snow in the wind get thee behind me

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/1/2015 10:14:00 AM

Janet, wow,,, intimidating imagery. Love it. Linda

David Meade

Date: 1/30/2015 3:14:00 PM

Ah, very clever -- as the hail is masquerading as snow, so does Satan within Peter . . . my favorite so far.

Janet Boebert
Date: 1/31/2015 2:08:00 PM

Thank you - I had a different last line, changed it. This one fits best.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/30/2015 2:06:00 PM

Great descriptive haiku Janet:-) Hugs Jan xx

Janet Boebert
Date: 1/31/2015 2:09:00 PM

Thank you for the encouragement - I like haiku; the form suits my thinking. But it's still pretty new for me.