Blissfully Free


Together we were mischievous and playful
The naughty two
You….a woman in her eighties 
Me….your daughter in her forties and a mini you

Singing, dancing, getting up to mischief
Playing tricks, living in moments of pure fun
Laughing until we couldn’t breathe 
Both playful, silly, carefree, feeling young

You taught me so much before you left this world
The serious side of life ….the rights, the wrongs
You were such an exceptional role model
Authentic, kind and strong

The greatest lesson you taught me by example
Perhaps it was also hereditary 
Was to fully and openly embrace my inner child with humour
Just let my inner child fly blissfully free

I am truly thankful and blessed for this gift l was given
I cherish the special joy and memories we shared
I know your inner child now flies with the angels
While here on earth my inner child l share
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Date: 1/3/2025 4:20:00 AM
A beautiful tribute, such fond memories, enjoyed this soulful, sentimental write, Deb
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Date: 12/14/2024 2:06:00 PM
I enjoy your writing style and content immensely. I find it to be filled with deep emotion while telling of real life issues , joys and pains. Your words flow without strain ,providing me with a sense of purpose and direction while telling of personal moments in time. Very touching. Thanks for sharing yourself though your work ! Darrell
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Date: 12/12/2024 8:06:00 PM
Hmm. My 'inner child' has escaped. Please advise!! Herr E. Upp
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Date: 12/12/2024 8:05:00 AM
Hi Deb, love your tribute to your wonderful mother, I can see where you get your wicked sense of humour from. Have a lovely day. xx
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Date: 12/12/2024 12:18:00 PM
She taught me well….thanks John! Debx
Date: 12/11/2024 4:41:00 AM
Deb, I am so deeply moved and impressed with this lovely tribute to you mom! Your are indeed truly blessed as am I with the example set my mom! My inner child will always be free as well and I have so proud of that Happy Wednesday from your silly little boy ( friend)!
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Date: 12/11/2024 11:38:00 AM
Hi Mike....l know the special relationship you have with your mum as you've shared with me before! I reckon our mum's would have had a ball together and you and me also!! I am so glad your inner child is alive and free like mine! Thankyou from my inner girl child to yours hehe!! Debx
Date: 12/10/2024 5:14:00 PM
Deb, this reminds me of the relatioshipbetweem my daughter and I.~ How uttelt amazing and a wonderfol piem Thank you Pangie.
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Date: 12/11/2024 11:42:00 AM
You like me are very lucky and blessed Pangie to have that very special bond and connected fun relationship. My mum was a beautiful, funny and brave lady and l miss her terribly! Thankyou my friend....Debx
Date: 12/9/2024 1:09:00 PM
A beautiful and touching poem..
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Date: 12/11/2024 11:43:00 AM
Thankyou so much....Debx
Date: 12/9/2024 12:25:00 PM
a beautiful tribute to your mom, deb!
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Date: 12/11/2024 11:46:00 AM
Thankyou ilene my mum was a very lovely human and a little eccentric....my dad died when l was a baby and she was left alone to raise five children...l loved and admired her so very much! Debx
Date: 12/9/2024 10:47:00 AM
- Playful, silly, carefree, feeling young sounds wonderful, Deb... we forget this part of life - Lovely poem in our world full of worries, stress and serious faces (which rarely smile or laugh) - hugs
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Date: 12/11/2024 11:53:00 AM
It is wonderful Sunshine my mum gave and showed me an amazing gift.....life can be so hard at times ....people need to try and embrace their inner child if possible and have some silliness and laughter! I always love reading your lovely comments....l hope you are well! Debx
Date: 12/9/2024 10:42:00 AM
Lovely tribute to your Mother Deb, she lives on in your heart.. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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Date: 12/11/2024 11:49:00 AM
She certainly does Tom...always! Yes all well....heading slowly up to Edinburgh! You on the move? Debx
Date: 12/9/2024 10:26:00 AM
Cheerful poem, nicely written.
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Date: 12/11/2024 11:47:00 AM
Thankyou so much Jay....always appreciated! Debx
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