Blissful World

Standing besides blue water in green surrounds
Sky and mountain become one in water and astounds

Feet on cool wet grass and mud in ground
Inhaling natural aroma as cool breeze flows around

In blissful ecstasy and tranquility I feel drowned
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Goldsmith Avatar
February 16, 2022 at 9:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful Rhyme write. Have a blessed day writing away.....................
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 16, 2022 at 4:06 AM
Beautifully executed, Rama, sensed peaceful resolve and my compliments for your winning entry my friend, Aloha~William, Cheers!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
February 16, 2022 at 1:48 AM
Congrats on your win with a beautiful poem.
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