Blissful Water

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Written: July 04, 2023
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A respected river, your holiness sublime. Purifies within if we let your essence seep. From the powerful mountains, you climb Pious and deep, it cures thirst spirits, creep We all joined in a loud wave of ovation. Farmers and anglers exploit it commonly. Before you slowly dyke into the ocean. Your pristine oceans are just heavenly. Favoring even those who have sinned. I've begun to write a tale of keen people. Your purity is lovely, a river so revered. You arose from the depths of a steeple. Quenching the thirst of souls, from the abyss. Peasants and boatmen, united in bliss, Your presence is a source of joy and peace. As we gather along your banks, we find release. But as you journey toward the endless sea, Our hearts ache, as we agnize you must leave. Yet your holiness remains, forever to foresee Waters, so pure, cleanse our souls, we believe.

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Date: 7/5/2023 3:30:00 PM
You can change the weather with your words. I felt the cooling water as I read this. Amazing command of the written word. Words seem to be puppets and beckon to your commend. Spectacular.
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Date: 7/5/2023 11:55:00 AM
All life is a journey. We either live it well or else we do not! If one follows truth and light they are safe. Those that do not follow such, thereby live a life of travails. Light, Truth lead to God's plan. On that course one never goes wrong. A fav as this is great poetry. God bless,..
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Date: 7/4/2023 10:40:00 PM
All work people should work for the common good. Is ammunition the greatest trade? Shame on us. Blessings
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