Kabuteng P.Ink K. Poet Rhyme

Blissful Grins--Trois Par Huit

fingers touch
paper foil, nothing much
‘til it strokes on rich, dark, silk pleasures

lovingly hugging caramel almond treasures
such a sweet antidote, such desperate measures
anything, to capture endorphins

chocolate indulgence
blissful grins


**May 25, 2010 written for Jared's Trois Par Huit contest :)

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Jared Pickett June 2, 2010 at 8:49 AM Nikko my friend, hey I would like to congratulate you on your placing in my Trois Par Huit contest and I hope to see you in my Rondel contest.....:JP]

Wilma Neels May 28, 2010 at 12:35 AM aah, now I dont feel guilty about my choc cravings ;) thank you Nikko

Carol Sunshine Brown May 26, 2010 at 10:28 AM It was a pleasure to read your poetry today Nikko. The best to you in the contest as always. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich May 25, 2010 at 10:17 PM Is this for you being in the candy business? You do chocolates right? YUMMM< just like this poem! good luck, Nikko. Luv, andrea

Mitch White May 25, 2010 at 10:02 PM A sinfully delicious write- P.S. SMiLES took me 3 min to write lol

Sharon Tideswell May 25, 2010 at 11:17 AM LOL, this is just so obviously your poem Nikko. I can just imagine this as a voice over on a TV commercial, spoken very seductively of course. I have to say it gave me blissful grins just reading it, but now I have to go and buy some chocolate. Hmm, I'll never fit into that oh so teeny bikini!!