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Bliss Through My Sister's Smile

Seashore, pleasant breeze
Sparrows, daffodils, gulls in the blue -
my baby sister smiles

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Skat A

July 1, 2013 at 10:27 PM

a sweet above the clouds poem...........XOX SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

June 25, 2013 at 9:48 PM

Jenish, CONGRATULATIONS! on your awesome win, in the "Above the Clouds" a contest by Drake Eszes. have yourself a nice one... xox~ LINDA

Richard Lamoureux

June 25, 2013 at 7:11 PM

A child's smile can lift a spirit to the sky. Congratulations.

Poet Tacito

June 25, 2013 at 2:35 PM

This was a very, very charming Haiku. Thank you so much for bringing this to my conest. A terrific entry! :)

Len Gasun

June 23, 2013 at 9:18 AM

Absolutely lovely and amazing this poem you've penned my dear friend, Jenish. I love it and so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing this gem of yours and your precious time stopping by leaving me an inspiring comments on my poem. Have a great weekend! love lots, Leonora