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bliss through my sister's smile


Seashore, pleasant breeze
Sparrows, daffodils, gulls in the blue -
my baby sister smiles

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/1/2013 10:27:00 PM
a sweet above the clouds poem...........XOX SKAT
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Date: 6/25/2013 9:48:00 PM
Jenish, CONGRATULATIONS! on your awesome win, in the "Above the Clouds" a contest by Drake Eszes. have yourself a nice one... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 6/25/2013 7:11:00 PM
A child's smile can lift a spirit to the sky. Congratulations.
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Date: 6/25/2013 2:35:00 PM
This was a very, very charming Haiku. Thank you so much for bringing this to my conest. A terrific entry! :)
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Date: 6/23/2013 9:18:00 AM
Absolutely lovely and amazing this poem you've penned my dear friend, Jenish. I love it and so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing this gem of yours and your precious time stopping by leaving me an inspiring comments on my poem. Have a great weekend! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 6/21/2013 1:57:00 PM
Absolutely excellent! Jenish the last line is so unexpected but evokes the image with completion. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/21/2013 1:19:00 PM
what a sweet haiku : )
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Date: 6/20/2013 12:24:00 PM
Hello Jenish, this is very sweet, and adoring... LINDA
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Date: 6/19/2013 5:19:00 AM
Ahhh!!! Enjoyed reading about a family holiday? Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 6/19/2013 2:55:00 AM
Very pleasant picture you have penned here!Love it.
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Date: 6/19/2013 12:53:00 AM
This is sweet....the simple things of life bring so much joy. Welcome , SuZ
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Date: 6/15/2013 3:08:00 PM
beautiful!
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Date: 6/15/2013 9:46:00 AM
like this
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