Bliss

in stillness and contended peace within this very moment here-&-now,
it is very clear that nothing much needs be done;
perfection and ultimate joy is present right now.

Tasting this feeling with all senses of my humanity has motivated me indefinitely
toward it's luster-&-gleam ~ it's warm comfort, it's bliss.

Profound oneness has unified with every cell of my body  and my heart pumps all
the euphoria throughout my biological system, my temple of an ideal & balanced
humanity; so long as I tap-in regularly.

Initially it was very so odd to imagine such content and joy exuding from me with such 
consistent energy. To think, "I am the only one feeling this" and the greatness is almost
very lonesome. 
Though, I have also concluded that the elated vibes that rippled through the ones nearby, 
makes this reality a beneficial one for all.
so consciously this time I balance like a surfer on his board & I approach the launch-pad like 
a rocketship... with careful and conscious, decided precision... 

though my heart has clearly said,  "Just relax, let it be."

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Date: 6/3/2017 2:24:00 AM
This is either Prose, or Narrative, if you are looking for the right form :) I like it a lot. Bliss indeed, but how hard is it to reach that blissful state of relaxation. Welcome to PoetrySoup.
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Kyle Young
Date: 6/5/2017 9:36:00 PM
Ah, prose. Thanks! That is a great point you brought up, I think it is best written in another prose or narrative; :) And, I'm glad to be here.
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