Bliss

I
will 
take your
heart and mines,
embracing the time
that has allowed us to be one
Forever in each others arms with our immortal souls
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 15, 2010 at 11:50 AM
The emotion comes through your words for an uplifting view. Thank you for sharing them with us and for your kind comment. Karen
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October 10, 2010 at 6:48 AM
What a lovely thought, Jamecia. Sounds like you are blessed by true love. And I like the way you use the fibonacci form -- I haven't tried this form before. Love, Carolyn
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