Bliss

Much captured in just five lines. Always good to end with hope. Nice answer to the challenge. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words on my poem. Karen

Beautifully written cinquain, short and sweet!

bliss is found moment by moments during excellent sex. and then, in the afterglow.

hmmmmm, have you ever reached a bliss state? Light & Love

nicely done

Like the hope at the end. Much said in just five lines. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us.

I Love This Yoni. Missing Hope....It Makes Me Want To Write. . . Ps Thank You For The Comments. I Let On For You And Sara Together...Im Glad You Liked It =) Luv Always Booboo

bliss state is great yet I can hold it but a second.......Light & Love!

We all need to dream about bliss. Nicely done. Keep writing. Sara

Great response to the challenge, Yoni ... what fun is PoetrySoup !!

I love this bliss-Celene

this is so true Yoni..excellent

Per your comments, no one filled with bliss could be considered a "negative Nancy." Got a good laugh from the comment, though I understand the comparison of flying too high near the sun. Love you! Carolyn

artistry in close form! Yoni!...jim

I love the way this brings a positive ending! Nicely done! ~ Carrie

Nicely done maestro! And thanks so much for your comments. It is said of wisdom, that when one can find humor in his own shortcomings, he knows where to find truth. "his own heart", Smile, Sincerely John Moses

Keep that hope coming. What an uplifting view in this poem. Blessings to you for sharing it. Karen

True words as ever from our "intense" young poet! Too bad some only find bliss when they dream. Your clever mind explodes with creativity and now I must study the cinquain form and attempt to meet the challenge. Thanks for the tag, Yoni. This should be fun and I can use some today. I'm tired of hauling boxes and unpacking. Ready to research the cinquain and respond shortly. Love you, Carolyn

Nicely done. Great messsage in a few short lines. Keep writing. Sara