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As we Chase the baubles Of glee Perhaps These shiny thrills Are scraps Begin Seeking treasures Within 05 Apr 2020 Musette Form lines 1 and 3 two syllables, line 2 four syllables rhyme scheme is aba, cdc, efe

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Date: 4/16/2020 5:17:00 PM
wow, I can see how this one got top placed. FANTASTIC work, David! Wish mine turned out that great.
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Date: 4/16/2020 6:19:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Your last three lines delight me well. God bless you.
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Date: 4/16/2020 4:03:00 AM
Very profound and a great read. Congratulations on your win David. Cheers Gary
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Date: 4/15/2020 6:29:00 PM
The last stanza was my favorite, Very nicely done David, Congrats on your win..
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