David Mohn Poet Rhyme

Bliss

As we
Chase the baubles
Of glee

Perhaps
These shiny thrills
Are scraps

Begin
Seeking treasures
Within

05 Apr 2020
Musette Form
lines 1 and 3 two syllables, line 2 four syllables
rhyme scheme is aba, cdc, efe

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Andrea Dietrich April 16, 2020 at 5:17 PM wow, I can see how this one got top placed. FANTASTIC work, David! Wish mine turned out that great.

Beata Agustin April 16, 2020 at 6:19 AM Wow! Congrats! Your last three lines delight me well. God bless you.

Gary Radice April 16, 2020 at 4:03 AM Very profound and a great read. Congratulations on your win David. Cheers Gary

Joseph May April 15, 2020 at 6:29 PM The last stanza was my favorite, Very nicely done David, Congrats on your win..