Blind-Sided

Blind-sided

At my highest point of love,
I thought I’d never be anointed 
with love’s oil of disappointment.
Now in the sweet sugar sand that ugly line
has been drawn with anything but kindness,
the thin line the runs somewhere
between love and hate,
that’s blind-sided me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Rich Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 7:13 AM
A beautiful read. Also thank you for your kind words on my latest if you have time please check out my saga, criminal part 3- ofcourse its not true just a story. Have a great day.
Mehta Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 11:35 PM
A nice entry to the contest. Good luck
Dietrich Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 11:16 PM
Sad one, Marie. It happens to too many people. I wanted you to know I got all your nice soupmails. I saw them in a rush today. I will go to them now and see if there were any for me to respond to. LUv, Andrea
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