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Blinds

close all windows shutting out world... peek not **Nov 8, 2010

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De R

Date: 2/29/2012 9:59:00 AM

'peek not'? I can't do that, nikko! I'm too curious...:-S I gotta peek! Nice senryu! hugs!

Sharon Winter

Date: 2/21/2011 11:38:00 AM

oh, and I do love this senryu. how I have felt a lot lately. you wrote it very well. but I am looking forward to spring and better day ahead! : )) take care! xoxo

Sharon Winter

Date: 2/21/2011 11:36:00 AM

hello sweet friend. I always smile when I hear from you, thanks so much for thinking of me. sadly its not a good year, lost my dog, and just lost my uncle. have to have oral surgery a week from tomorrow, bleck! but...still, I have so many blessings in my life, they help so much to drive the sadness and worry away. trying real hard to concentrate on all the positive things. after all, everyone goes through tough times, this is life. hope you and yours are well. I do adore you. hugs, me xo

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 11/25/2010 11:04:00 PM

Nicely done! Oh for that peace from closing out and just being.... for the freedom and privacy too... Thanks for your lovely comments left!

Date: 11/24/2010 4:48:00 PM

Sad way to live though. Much said in these few words. Thank you for your kind comment. Happy Thanksgiving! Karen

Date: 11/18/2010 4:20:00 PM

Interesting snapshot. You have me smiling with this one. Karen

David Smalling

Date: 11/18/2010 8:41:00 AM

And if I could what would I see, a peeker peeking out in search of me? One love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2010 9:22:00 PM

gosh, I've missed a lot of yours lately it looks like. Cute line peek not!! Luv, Andrea

Gert W. Knop

Date: 11/15/2010 3:50:00 AM

Hey Nikko, hope you had a nice weekend! Still enjoyed the read of your Senryu! Ingat lingo!...Gert :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/13/2010 8:40:00 AM

hey Nikko, wow i like the meaning to this one, we all sometimes use our "blinds", enjoyed your write,..P.D.

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 11/12/2010 10:43:00 AM

Excellent, captures place and mood and is so paranoid feeling:)

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 11/11/2010 12:03:00 PM

sometimes its nice to shut the world out. .so true dear. .hope you arè fine.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 11/11/2010 4:09:00 AM

Hey Nikko, so true! Sometimes it is best to shut out the world and close all windows!!! Ingat!..Gert:)

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/10/2010 8:05:00 PM

I want to shut mine and never peek. Pity I don't have blinds ;( great senryu Missy *hugs*

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/10/2010 11:18:00 AM

Nikko, there are many people who choose to go through life wearing blinders to shut out the chaos in today's world. A very timely and well written senryu! Love, Carolyn

Hathor Ammutlinra

Date: 11/9/2010 11:52:00 AM

A genuine lock within the soul, Great Senryu` (Ammut~Lin~Ra)

Fabiyas M V

Date: 11/9/2010 5:25:00 AM

profound thoughts.sweet write,friend

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 11/8/2010 9:40:00 AM

Nice senryu Nikko. The trouble is, I just have to peek, and then usually wish I hadn't, hehe ~ Hugs, Sharon ;) (this is me peeking with just one eye)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/8/2010 5:26:00 AM

Written with deep meaning my friend... Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/8/2010 5:19:00 AM

Yes, nikko, blimds are meant to shut the world and control your tendency to peek,