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Blinded By the Light

I dreamt of you last night Echoes in an empty corridor Foot prints leading to a door to outside White oblique, nothingness, cold, empty colorless snow storm lost and all alone….. Blinding white; you could not find your way Frozen in time and space time erased Not able to discern which way was up or down Blinded by White East west north south. Desperately seeking ,.seeking Seeking, not finding Frozen tears Iscicles forming And all the while I was inviting you to come into my warmth And come in out of the cold Come here and let me back into your heart again. And you answered; I’m not lost I am just dreaming

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/16/2009 3:14:00 AM
Jeremiah, What a nice comment from a gifted writer! I am also humbled to see your post remarking on my scribbles. mya your days be happy and creative!
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Date: 5/16/2009 3:12:00 AM
Hi Colin. Long time since we have crossed paths. Thank you dear one ,for your remark and comforting little smiley man.Yours is a real compliment,since you shine like the stars and you write like nobody else I have ever seen. I am humbled you were here to say hello.
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Date: 5/13/2009 6:59:00 AM
Hi Koko... wonderful poetry ! ;)
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Date: 5/13/2009 6:53:00 AM
Beautiful poem indeed! - jeremiah
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