Erica Gould Poet Rhyme

Blinded By Love

I tried so hard to warn you.
Tried to make you see.
But your broken heart beats ragged,
As you try, so desperately, 
To hold it all together.
But the pieces fall apart.
Marred, by all the scars,
He shattered your naive heart.

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J. Dover December 29, 2011 at 1:39 PM great poem, again- i feel like we're so alike, nothing more annoying than telling someone they arent in a good realtionship and having to tell them later that you were right all along... great rhythm, love, J.

Kacey Greenlee March 3, 2011 at 5:56 PM BEAUTIFUL FEEL ON THIS,KEEP IT UP,BIG SUPPORTER.

Joe Inka January 8, 2011 at 8:44 PM Well said. I think it gets a little stronger every time we are forced to put it back together. Too many times though and it turns to stone

Poet Destroyer A December 30, 2010 at 6:53 PM Erica..,, enjoyed your poem. Stopping by to wish you lots of cheers & joy this comming new year.. May you always find new ways to share your talent and imagination with us here at the soup. Happy new year to you and your family,, God bless,.miss.p.d.