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Blinded By Love

I tried so hard to warn you. Tried to make you see. But your broken heart beats ragged, As you try, so desperately, To hold it all together. But the pieces fall apart. Marred, by all the scars, He shattered your naive heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/29/2011 1:39:00 PM
great poem, again- i feel like we're so alike, nothing more annoying than telling someone they arent in a good realtionship and having to tell them later that you were right all along... great rhythm, love, J.
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Date: 3/3/2011 5:56:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL FEEL ON THIS,KEEP IT UP,BIG SUPPORTER.
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Date: 1/8/2011 8:44:00 PM
Well said. I think it gets a little stronger every time we are forced to put it back together. Too many times though and it turns to stone
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Date: 12/30/2010 6:53:00 PM
Erica..,, enjoyed your poem. Stopping by to wish you lots of cheers & joy this comming new year.. May you always find new ways to share your talent and imagination with us here at the soup. Happy new year to you and your family,, God bless,.miss.p.d.
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