Blind Love

You're turning grey.
Oops, so am I,
And what are those small lines,
At the corner of your eye?

Did I hear you right?
That I look o.k.?
Or are you just trying
To make my day?

The years have passed so quickly.
Youth was only yesterday

But my love for you
Is still as blind,
As on our wedding day.


Brenda Atry
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Davis Avatar
September 25, 2013 at 6:54 PM
This is so sweet and romantic, Proves that time only makes love stronger. Nice job
Brown Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 8:34 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Brenda. Love, Carol
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April 14, 2011 at 9:56 PM
Very melodic. Also a great reminder to purchase some of my lucky "Just For Men" Beard Dye! Doesn't do much for the crow's feet in the corners of my eye though! ~JS Lambert
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