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Blind Faith Fosters Understanding

Still waters rage from the depths of hell. The fiery furnaces’ forces propel. No longer shall earth see speedwell or bluebell. The cleansing fire has begun its deadly smell. God’s created earth now feels its decadence. Evil “ate” souls because men remained entranced. Loosing self-restraint forced choosing right askance. Strength and righteousness have lost their stance. Azure dreams heap memories upon the seas. White foam salts man’s wounds; usurped powers seize. Disguised deceit winks on submerged marquees. Lost freedom divides, crashes, burning jetties. Unsuspecting factions can barely believe How quickly schemes conceived deceive faith…naïve. Smokey clouds hover as righteous ways leave. The eye of God watches the faithless bereave. Prophecies and signs help the faithful endure. The earth rips asunder from places obscure. The cleansing fire shall a paradise procure. Freed by God’s begotten son, our Savior. Written for Paula Swanson’s Contest – Blind Faith © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen May 22, 2010 Poetic form: Quatrain

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Date: 11/12/2010 11:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry X3 making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Dane Ann. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/10/2010 5:37:00 AM
Congrats Dane Ann on having three poems selected in the first round of competition in the P.S. contest my friend.. good luck in the next phase for all three luv..
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Date: 5/23/2010 7:00:00 AM
You make some insightful points, Dane Ann. I especially like the was "Prophecies and signs help the faithful endure." Excellent serious poem that will do well in the contest, but I am also just now beginning to realize what an amazing sense of humor you have!!! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/23/2010 2:33:00 AM
A wonderful write. Good luck in the contest
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