Blind Eyed Love

Can she see me standing by her side

Does she feel me breathing for the both of us

Is her pulse still flowing and can she feel the wind blowing

Can you hear a feint of a heartbeat

Or am I too late

Can she sense my presence 

Or is she too disoriented 

Tell me why is she unresponsive 

Tell me please she will come back to me

Do you think there's still a chance for this

To be just my imagination running faster then my mind

Take my life and give hers back

Please lord give her one chance of slack

Breathe the life back into her lungs

Tell me there's a way to make it undone

Can she see me say her side

Does she hear my sorrowing cry

Bring her back to me

Or let me join her side

I can see her clearly now as she stands there by my side

I can hear her but she can't hear me

She crys my name and begs for my return

A wishful though I can't undue

A life in exchange i gave to you

And now she can't help but shutter as I place my hand upon her shoulder

She sees me lying down but cannot see the warming grasp is from me

She holds my aura to her face to feel the ghostly warm embrace

Almost as though she could hear my voice

As I tell her I died for her as my last choice

As she turns her head and smiles and wipes the tears away to give one last rejoice 

And she whispers back to what she cannot she

She will wait for her time to be up so never again will she lose me

And now she can see her life was meant for me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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